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"the emo kid stands in the path of wicked sitting in the seat of the scornful he lies his head in the path of thorns it doesn't matter where he ...

gosh people! can't you say something !?h

Thanks Liz! I fixed the changes...sounds better now.

Did I read this already? Seems like I did. Anyway, it was emo, mediocre whatever you wanna call it. All that jazz. But you still managed to get away from ...

I liked the concept but it seemed a little wordy in some places.

I changed all the "I's" and stuff and I liked it 10 times more. But before that, I didn't feel connected at all..

Besides the fact that it was written beautifully, it kind of made me shudder. And I sort of have an idea of what it's about and that...sucks.

I'm not trying to make it personal...because like, it doesn't even relate to me. How is it personal?

Wow. You're being very descriptive, Liz! I must admit, you have come LONG ways. I salute you. =) Great job.

Thanks Hunter and Brad. I know how you feel Brad. and yeah, it was a little vague. And as you can probably see, Hunter, I changed it to Summers. =)

Wow...I don't know what to say really...it's kind of hard to say anything in situations like that. All you can do is like pray for the family and friends who ...

I must say, you have come a long way since the TYWC days. Not really my style, but a lot better than the old stuff.

:raises eyebrow: I...assume this is another part of the poem? Anyhow, it's nice ;D

Wow Jack...okay. I'll have to give you an A then. :) What a very interesting way to interpet that... That was great.

I'm actually thinking about writing a sequel. However, I have a question for everybody...which is better...Corduroy Springs or Corduroy Summers? Corduroy Springs kind of sounds like a lake or a ...