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I love the cover you did and the mirror in the background, I think it works really well. Even though the prologue was rather short I think it was well ...

Hello :) Just thought I would let you know that for some reason I can picture Mr Medd as this character :L Aha ;) And Freeman the demon :L Love ...

I really like this, it was a good start :) Only a couple of things I could see, I didn’t recognize this room… Where am I? Put what I put ...

Hello :) She would transform herself into a little girl but the magic would wear off and she would get caught. H er name is Fernengala, she is from the ...

I really liked this, I have never read something like this before and I actually found it sad :( Aha ;) Well done, I enjoyed it . Keep it up ...

Hello, I like this story line its different from anything else I have read. :) At the beginning of the chapter I think you could of describe her surroundings and ...

I’m really not a big fan of poetry but this I really liked. The last stanza was my favourite. leaving nought but a cold, dark stone imprinted with titles, sweet ...

I don't normally read these kind of stories but overall I actually enjoyed it. I think it would of been better if you would of told us more about the ...

Wow, I love it :) I can't wait for the thrid chapter now...I wan't to know what a "Nightling" is... :D I don't think I could see any obvious mistakes. ...

Hello :) A few things to change... With much difficulty (I wasn't designed to swim evidently...) I went... N owhere. You don't need to use a capital here :) However, ...

Hello, another chapter done :( Your make me depressed ;) Why was it that everyone hear seemed to think I had some kind of gift? ^-- I think you mean ...

Heyy :) 1) Who knocked her out? 2) They couldn’t stand the fact that I wanted t o make a choice without caring what they said about it.” And 3) ...

This was good :) One thing though... Edward was unconditionally perfect and constantly dazzling doesn’t mean any random is allowed to fall in love with him. Any random what? It ...

This looks good. A bit short, but that doesn't really matter. Lucy looked at the rest of the village that she had just attacked, the rest of the pack she ...