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Re: Fool's Gold
Hello Chaser, I was surprised by the last line. Does that mean the speaker is content with the fake smiles? This is an excellent poem. The title, the structure, the ...
Oct 30, 2015 -
Re: The Deepening of the Night
Hello ladcat13, I like this poem because it is beautiful, and useless without pretense. But the problem I have with it is that most of the expressions are cliche, not ...
Oct 30, 2015 -
Re: I Hate Clocks
Hello SnazzyPencil, I hate this poem - pun intended, please - because it reminds me how people can write horrible stuff and call it poetry; and I wish you would ...
Oct 26, 2015 -
Re: The Enthusiasm of Annie Tate Happercorn
Hello BethsLlama, It was silly; the 'simple' in line 3 could be 'silly'. I don't think you have an action or adventure poem there. The narration enchanted me (Her boundless ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: when you cant understand the word omnipresent
Excellement! This caught me. Well, though, it was a difficult poem, so I would try to understand it in my own way. It is perhaps a sad poem mourning the ...
Jun 9, 2015 -
Re: Angelboy left home
War memories really stick in the mind and refuse to go. Even after fifteen years they can still cause eccentricities and all that. It’s a significant theme for a poem ...
Mar 19, 2015
