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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Fool's Gold

    Hello Chaser, I was surprised by the last line. Does that mean the speaker is content with the fake smiles? This is an excellent poem. The title, the structure, the ...

    Oct 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Deepening of the Night

    Hello ladcat13, I like this poem because it is beautiful, and useless without pretense. But the problem I have with it is that most of the expressions are cliche, not ...

    Oct 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Hate Clocks

    Hello SnazzyPencil, I hate this poem - pun intended, please - because it reminds me how people can write horrible stuff and call it poetry; and I wish you would ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: The Enthusiasm of Annie Tate Happercorn

    Hello BethsLlama, It was silly; the 'simple' in line 3 could be 'silly'. I don't think you have an action or adventure poem there. The narration enchanted me (Her boundless ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: when you cant understand the word omnipresent

    Excellement! This caught me. Well, though, it was a difficult poem, so I would try to understand it in my own way. It is perhaps a sad poem mourning the ...

    Jun 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, Narrative Re: Angelboy left home

    War memories really stick in the mind and refuse to go. Even after fifteen years they can still cause eccentricities and all that. It’s a significant theme for a poem ...

    Mar 19, 2015


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