Charm

I HATE THIS SOOOO MUCHHH OMGGGGG xD *future marma rereading her work*

WHY WAS I SO PROUD OF THIS CRAP AAAAHHHH IT'S SO BAD NUUUUU

WHY DOES THIS HAVE 19 LIKES?!?!!? this is literal trash

thanks :)

fixed* (why did I write "can't"? xD wut?)

Hey, I can't my poem and I like it better. I took your advice but kept somethings I liked. What do you think?

i waannnaa talkk toooo

this work makes me wish there was a super like button, so i could like this and super like this.

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah i love this i relate to this you are one amazing pickle

Yeah okay

Thanks niteowl this review helps a lot! The 'so' is too awkward so I'll just add the 'if' lol

Oh okay. I see why you like that version, but "I am made of more than just fire" is my favorite line and it adds imagery into my mind. It's ...

Please don't call me hon. i want to believe i am made of more than just fire more than a crackling blaze and you promise i am then why do ...

I've decided to cut out line 1 but I'm not so sure about the 'if' still. I feel like it's changing the meaning. It's not an 'if' situation, it's a ...

Thanks. I'm not entirely sure what you're trying to tell me. Get rid of line 1 and line 3? Also adding the 'if' in line 4 changes what I'm trying ...