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Even if I'm slow I will walk with my own feet, because I know this path is mine to take, I will never lose my dream.

  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: 3:45am/35mm

    aw thank you!

    Mar 14, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: taught me how to breathe

    you're blowing my mind with your art

    Mar 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: 3:45am/35mm

    you're such a good poet i don't understand how this only has 2 likes like????????? ugh. you're a very good poet.

    Mar 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: campfire hums

    @frinderman repetition is not a negative term it's a literary device and this poem does have repetition in it. Also @silberfee thank you for your insight. the lack of capitalization ...

    Mar 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: meaning:null

    i LOVE this so much

    Mar 4, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Death's Reign Draft 1 Chapter 1

    Thanks!

    Mar 2, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Death's Reign Draft 1 Chapter 1

    Like I said your review was good and if I didn't like it I wouldn't have spent time writing a long ass paragraph response xD normally I just wrote "Thanks" ...

    Mar 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Death's Reign Draft 1 Chapter 1

    I didn't find this offending haha and you are actually very good at reviewing. Eudora is a bit like me in the way she feels towards Mr. Kingsley (write from ...

    Mar 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Artist

    i love this sooooooooooooooooooooo much!

    Feb 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Rachel

    thank you bb

    Feb 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Rachel

    This review was so good! Thank you so much

    Feb 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: tsunami treasures

    Thank you!

    Feb 23, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Autobiography

    i loooooooooove this.

    Feb 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: tsunami treasures

    No, I wouldn't put "you push (me) out; you pull (me) in" because the "you" is the tide and that wouldn't make sense to the story. Thanks for the review.

    Feb 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: Full/Frontal/Defeated/At/Last

    i really love this poem.

    Feb 23, 2017


You're wrong about humanity. They are your greatest creation because they're better than you are. Sure, they're weak, and they cheat and steal and destroy and disappoint, but they also give and create, and they sing and dance and love. Above all, they never give up.
— Metatron