Charm

OMG I LOVE ALL OF YOUR POETRY YOU ARE TALENTED IN EVERYTHING YOU DO WHETHER IT'S WRITING POETRY OR PROSE. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH SAV

"she calls me selfish" is the title of the poem, i only put it at the end because i was inspired by Rupi Kaur.

thanks

this is so beautiful

Yay! I'm glad this helped! Hopefully Margo won't be soooo annoying in the future but then again I'm writing her this way on purpose xD

I'm glad!

I edited this chapter a little bit and I hope it makes Margo seem better. She isn't trying to get into Juno's business anymore but instead learn more magic since ...

added a little more dialogue at the end and i'm hoping it makes it seem like Margo realizes her mistake because i want her to xD

I'll try to work on Margo a little bit. I was starting to feel like Margo was hard to sympathize with so it's good to hear that it's not just ...

Yeah this is a first draft

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review. This is my weakest chapter but I'm planning on rewriting it in the future. It's sort of because I really wanted to write chapter 10, haha.

Thanks

Thank you!

awe lumi i can't read it because the image is blocked :c can you write it in a writerfeed pad for me please