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Even if I'm slow I will walk with my own feet, because I know this path is mine to take, I will never lose my dream.

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: It's My Fault

    You're not annoying me and this poem is about this childhood friend. It's a message to her and when I say 'I'll never break the habit' it's me talking about ...

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: It's My Fault

    Thank you

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bottled Up Emotions

    Thank you

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bottled Up Emotions

    Thank you

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bottled Up Emotions

    Thank you so much and I lot of people in my poetry say I'm rhyming but I never notice. One thing you should know about me is that I never ...

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bottled Up Emotions

    Thanks and the narrator is me xD So yeaaah. I wanted this poem to be me just speaking my mind. You know how I would actually speak but I understand ...

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bottled Up Emotions

    Thanks Ladybug~

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bottled Up Emotions

    Thanks and I found the picture on pinterest~ Yeah I'm going to fix the two lines. I don't want to sound like a alcoholic

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Star-Crossed Lovers

    Thank you for this review

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Not How We Dreamed

    Thanks for the review. Like I said to people in other reviews, 'me' in my poem is repetition, it's there for a reason. It's supposed to shown hidden meaning

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Not How We Dreamed

    Also with the 'me' that's intentional it's repetition which is not a bad thing. I feel like so many people think repetition is a bad thing. It's only bad when ...

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Not How We Dreamed

    Thanks so much for this review. Also I've never noticed that I rhyme... I don't do that on purpose xD

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Not How We Dreamed

    Aww! Thank you so much! This poem is really personal to me because I moved a lot and everytime I move I expect it to be like the movies. I ...

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Not How We Dreamed

    Thanks for the review

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Not How We Dreamed

    Thank you! That means a lot!

    Feb 1, 2016


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