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Love this novel that you are writing! Chapter 1 was great and I'm so happy to be reading the second chapter. "'You should at least try to pay attention to ...

Hi! I thought that this was really good. When writing a novel you should always write things fully out "My bangs hang a little over my eyes, yet my hair ...

The first paragraph is amazing. Your descriptions are on point. This sentence seems a little weird though "Dust clouded the air, as although the scene was coloured with extravagance, the ...

This was an amazing prologue. I'm extremely curious about what happens next. The only things that I think need tinkering is your grammar and a couple of sentences were a ...

I have two questions: 1. Do you know the game Life is Strange because this is very similar to it. 2. How does someone not know what the word emo ...