Charlotte2

Thank you!

Thank you for the critiques. I do make sure to read through my poems and this rhythm (I think myself) is kinda weird and different to what I've done before. ...

Okay, thank you. I felt this poem wasn't as good as some of my others, but the suggestions are really helpful. I'll definitely take them into account. Thank you for ...

Thank you! The capitalization thing is just something I do because I like the overall look of it. I have gone over it, but I just don't like it so ...

i'm a lil baby earthling idk

Thank you so much. I'm so happy to see that you like my poetry. When I was writing it, I was actually thinking of falling in love with the complexity ...

I actually have another poem that I've put up here, called "Twilight's Ecstasy", and if you liked "17 Seconds" you'll probably like this one.

Thank you so much. I'm quite new here so I'm really happy that you've enjoyed my poem!

For anyone reading this, I know technically I should be using capital letters and punctuation all the way through, but it's just my preferred style to do it like this.