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Re: Chapter One - When We Grow Up
Love it! The atmosphere created is effective and your grammar and spelling is good also :)
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: Hunted ch. 16
I love this!!! Your grammar is very good and I love your writing style. I can't really see much that needs improving...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: Mirror of Erised
Wow! I like this! It's really good :) I've just entered the contest also...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: Mind Games
I LOVE THIS!!! I really like the use of poetic technique and the fact that I can readily connect and empathize with the persona
Aug 7, 2011