Charlii101

as the sky unravels its chemise of cirrus, loving these word describing really well you say that a man’s bare torso is flexed on the full moon, his limbs flung ...

Loving the christmassy effect and the plot behind it all just read through and watch out for a few grammer mistakes. but thats all i really think this is good ...

WOW! wicked the first one of your happy poems lol it's really good i love the but where you put here eys tell a story, it's dead good loving it ...

one of my favorites i always loved your stories even though i don't get this much lol, i really like this and i find it full of emotion it's got ...

oooo this has got romance twisted in i really like this poem it's good really good i enjoyed reading it, you should carry on writting stuff like this! Brill improvement: ...

Edward and Bella's story ended in the book Breaking Dwan .......... Now a new story begins from Renesmee Cullen's point of view ......... This is her story Forever Dusk ~ ...

i thought this was about hwo much you loved a person and then the ending chnages my thought and i now think you are only showing "fake love" because this ...

hey this is good i'm liking the story but what is going to happen next? i've never read this story but i'm liking the version you have done of it, ...

ooo i'm liking the mystery behind it and loving the little snow fairys,it brings out imaginative creatisum and it really hooks the reader, to improve describe the person whos walking ...

Loving the acting school and the emotion flowling throught it you've got hate and anger and sadness and then a bit of joy all mixed up perfectly and it shows ...

this is really good i like how it sounds, like an animal is listening to all these things or something! errm to coment back i would say pay attenion to ...

it's good but it doesn't have the thing to make you want to read on more (i don't mean to be mean) but if you added a few tweeks like ...

i'm liking this it got good emotion and shows romance in some areas, you just need to work on the pastionate bit i mean if its a short romance story ...

it hooks you in straight away even though i don't get poetry much i kind of got this loved how it flows and has a devistating ending it holds alot ...

sweet to write about your dog! :D just a few changes in beween paragaphs why don't you out me and my dog my dog and me then carry on with ...