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Sure! And you're more than welcome. :)

It's amazing what another set of eyes can do. Ugh! So many typos! And I read over multiple times! Thanks though! I'll definitely try to fix the things you pointed ...

Thanks! Oh my goodness, this is such high praise for this little snippet. XD I hope I can keep the quality up, since I do plan on adding more to ...

Setting description. Ugh. I'm horrible at that. It would help with slowing down my story though, like you mentioned. I'll try to add some more in this chapter and definitely ...

Yeah... This plot is nowhere near finished in development, which is probably why I haven't posted another part. :) You did bring up some good questions that can help me ...

I never even noticed I used "I" so much! Thank you for the review! XD

Thank you for reviewing! This chapter wasn't polished as well as the others so thanks again for finding all my errors. :)

Thank you very much! XD

Thank you for the review! I hope I can get the next part up soon. ;)

Luca is part of the team now! ^-^ I did think he'd be harder to convince though, he was pretty rough in the first chapter.

Ah well, I suppose it is a fitting end. I guess I'll have to check out your other works instead. :D You're more than welcome for the review.

Ah! Thank you so much! I didn't even realise I had another review on this! The next part should be out soon. (I hope!) Thanks again for all the tips. ...

Thanks! :)

More, more, moreeeeee! Plz. :D This is too good!

No problem!