Chanson

oh, ok. one flaw. the title. something more...romantic. and pretty, like the story.

ha. me likes.

hunter - what i believe to be poetry. this isn't my idea of peotry. there are all sorts of diiferent ideas of what it is, that is how new poetry ...

apart from the spelling (their, not 'there', 'too' not to) i really liked it. i thought it was pretty powerful for a short poem and also thought provoking. cool.

i didn't say it was wrong because i realise poetry can't be wrong, it's an art. that doesn't stop you from not enjoying it sometimes. i never write poems that ...

i wasn't sure about that line. it would be great to have some more help on it. thanks for the suggestions :lol:

eh, honestly i don't even remember sending ths poem in and it was yesterday. i wasn't exactly... thinking straight. so i apologize deeply.

my i-pod=my life. it's kind of become like a body part. it's permanently attached. i'm known as the pod-whore. IT'S NOT MY FAULT. trust me to fall in love with ...