ChangeTheWorld

Thanks so much!

Thanks for the review! :)

Sure! Of course anything I say is always just a suggestion ;)

Yeah I was a bit iffy about that part too. I was trying to convey that he was only more popular because he was finally showing himself to the world ...

I actually did end it like that and she was saying she didn't like understand that so I took the bit out just because I wasn't sure what to do. ...

No I get what you're saying. I'm always grateful for people's honest opinions. I'll keep that in mind.

uurrgggg. Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it, but I see I still haven't fixed those last lines quite well enough ;)

Oh gosh, I actually changed the last line three times, but can't figure out a good way to put it apparently. I tried to space between the sections but it ...

Ack. Is that better at all for clarification?

Thanks so much! That means the world to me!

Thanks for the review! Because she is beautiful, that's why he keeps saying it. But I totally get what you mean and I'll try to think of a better way ...

Thanks! The story's completely written I just wasn't sure how soon to post it.

You are so sweet!! Thank you so much!

No it's really not bad grammar at all, those things were minor. But I definitely got the informal feel you were going for.

Thanks Rosie! :D