ChangeTheWorld

HEY! Fun fact, you don't know me, But I'm an older member and I was gone but now I'm back and you're my first returning review. Tell me how I ...

Here to review for you cause you asked oh so nicely! I'M SCARED This is partially just a personal preference of mine, but reading things all capitalized is annoying. The ...

Here I am! I hope I can help, though I don't have a lot of experience reviewing this sort of thing. This quotation implies that too much of something is ...

Must empty green room! And I am a rock I love the repetition. I'm a huge fan of that in poetry if it's used well, and here it is, I ...

Alright here you are! Review time! As she was announced, the fairy Princess Celestia, or Selena, as she liked to be called, glided into the ballroom. She was indeed a ...

Hey! here for one more bud! Have you ever seen a deer bounce across the lawn I think this might be better as "prance" instead of "bounce." I wonder what ...

It's really only fitting I review this, all things considered :) But I also wanted to thank you for the wonderful reviews you left me. Hey you! Yeah you sitting ...

Boom! I'm here. And I'm not going to write a review by babbling! Probably. Maybe... I am unfocused, unaware. So this line doesn't really fit with the stanza it's in. ...

Back again! his head tilting to the head slightly I'm sure you didn't mean to have this extra "head" in here. And then just a small comment about the sentence ...

Sup? “Atrocity? What does that mean?” One of The Muscles scratched his head in confusion. “Atrocity – a brutal and cruel act of violence.” I'm so glad I haven't had ...

Hey there Igs! I'm going to review this fine piece of beauty! The words make Jared groan and he slammed his forehead into the door So just a small thing, ...

Yay! One more poem my friend :) Are filled with marshmallow clouds And beauty spots pierce the sun’s face. SSSOOOO. This first line. You said "darkening skies" but "marshmallow" to ...

Since this one has less reviews I think I'll do this and maybe another. for that which is far too far. I like this line. I have to say I ...

Deanie beanie! Hi! :) Lace your arms around me. So I get the sense this is not a great relationship, and lace is such a soft and caring word, but ...

Here again! I'm enjoying this poetry reviewing for a little while! Rain washed the city as I woke up. Its 3 AM. My room is dark, immobile. I see this ...