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Re: Sorry's enough - I just can't say it
Speechless just wonderfull really nicely done perfect lenght the rhyming everthing just wonderfull :)
Mar 15, 2006 -
Re: The still of night
I adjusted it a little bit :) Thnx for the Comments Writersdomain !
Mar 6, 2006 -
Re: Queen
didn't read the poem tooo long but are you really 98 years old ??? :?
Feb 27, 2006 -
Re: The still of night
nymore comments nyone ?
Feb 19, 2006 -
Re: Travel Along
nymore comments ?? :wink: :roll:
Feb 8, 2006 -
Re: Travel Along
Yeah I did mean ''Fairy Tale'' LOL
Jan 30, 2006 -
Re: un-named
I have to agree with Snoink the last stanza was a little cliched... Verrrry Nice work for a Nine year old :wink:
Jan 30, 2006 -
Re: the ice is melting
Pretty Good for a first poem.. But I'dd recommend you to capitalize the ''I'' :wink:
Jan 30, 2006 -
Re: The Darker Side of Me
Nymore comments peepzz ??
Jan 13, 2006 -
Re: The Darker Side of Me
I changed some parts which I had to agree with Writersdomain that were a little of rythem.. Caught up feelings, tripped emotions, spilled blood and cut out insides. Liquid tears ...
Jan 10, 2006 -
Re: Drivin’ in this Land of Fellatial Screams
hahaha nice try Psylynx..But youre RIGHT !!! hahaha :P I like your way of words.. Greetzz
Jan 6, 2006 -
Re: Citrus Mist
i'm real sorry but I just don't seem to get the rythem here.. :( I like the topic tough...
Jan 5, 2006 -
Re: Cat and Mouse
Hard to understand but still I think its wickedly tought... Nice job I like a poem that's hard to understand as it might mean something different to different kinds of ...
Dec 30, 2005 -
Re: Cold Winds
Well i changed it a bit..the third stanza i'll see what I can do with the second one Thnx :)
Dec 29, 2005 -
Re: For Someone Special..
Well thnx I don't think I will change it cause I don't really feel like I like it the way it cuz it kinda shows my feelings for someone.. I ...
Dec 19, 2005