User avatar

Cglefley

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: If Only, If Only You Knew

    Haha I'm back :D Seriously though, you're really good at poetry. This almost hits home - relationship troubles suck. There is a lot of emotive language involved, like the "yearn" ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: most beautiful of all

    Personally, I loved it! I think that the structure is effective - the one liners that are like "the sunlight is beautiful" definitely emphasises the beauty of things. The poem ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Yellow, Unforgettable

    I loved it! The structure is definitely effective on the poem; it makes it more effective. The "I love you" is moving - the structure with where it's placed makes ...

    Jun 30, 2017


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein