Cglefley

Haha I'm back :D Seriously though, you're really good at poetry. This almost hits home - relationship troubles suck. There is a lot of emotive language involved, like the "yearn" ...

Personally, I loved it! I think that the structure is effective - the one liners that are like "the sunlight is beautiful" definitely emphasises the beauty of things. The poem ...

I loved it! The structure is definitely effective on the poem; it makes it more effective. The "I love you" is moving - the structure with where it's placed makes ...