Centurion

Thanks for dropping by with the review, it definitely helped. To address the part with the gloves, the reasoning behind it is that since they are in a war zone, ...

Thanks for the review, it's nice to see someone else interested in this type of fiction. I plan on expanding the story, as I have begun planning the full length ...

The dialogue form was really nice. The flow and sentence structure reminds me of some of Cormac Mccarthy's work. The dialogue was easy to follow and was smooth and effective ...

Nice piece overall.

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I am by no means an expert in poetry, so you can take my words by a grain of salt. But overall, I really did like your piece. For some ...

My inspiration for this was the video game INSIDE. Nearly the whole story is ambiguous. Only details, if any, are just simply given, not why something is the way it ...

Wishful thinking if everyone could get along, but I fear that not even this generation nor the one after it will get to see it Time and time again I ...