This has a lot of meaning. I get that the mind could be deceiving, I've been there, and lovers are deceiving, but I think it was a beautiful twist when you wrote that the heart was the most deceiving of all. This is an inspiring piece of work that holds a lot of truth and I understand how so many branches of love and emotions can fool you. I wish more people could see this because this would open people's eyes to what it means to love and like. It's dangerous, but we succumb to it so easily and I think that's what you're trying to convey right? This is a masterpiece and bless you for writing such an inspiring piece of poetry. You have talent, and I think you do an amazing job at letting it radiate off of your work. Keep up the amazing work!
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