Celticmelody

Let me know if any of the changes I made help a little. I really want to get this poem right because it is one of my personal favorites. Punctuation, ...

This is my second post, I've tried adding more punctuation. My first poem Flowing Swiftly had very little if any punctuation. Please give me any advice for improvement. Thanks.

Thank you for the advice. This is my first post and I really do appreciate it. I had to do this poem from memory last year, and I think the ...

I like your poem, it expresses your opinions. I see how a sword can cleave one's life apart, through grief. Keep writing.

I love the poem. It's very expressive, and much better than any that I will post. I love the word choice as well. Already I am evaluating my own writing ...