Celticmelody

I thought your imagery was really beautiful. I had to read this poem twice to understand what it was talking about. You have great rhymes, and the whole piece flows ...

This poem really makes me stop and think. It seems in this mordern day and age we hardly ever sit down and talk anymore. I love how you leave the ...

Your word choice is amazing. I suggest removing the braces and the exclamation point in (but never for too long!). Also, you start off with a rhyme, but then it ...