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Re: Blank Page
This poem is beautiful. I would've not thought about how "writing" would have a connection with "love". Truly, the opening was fantastic! It was a process of how writers begin ...
Aug 3, 2013 -
Re: Vowing After Death
Very nice poem about love. It surely gave me a sweet impression of how love feels. Indeed, it was clearly a "love-truth" in words. "The heart is one’s home Even ...
Aug 3, 2013 -
Re: I Tried
The whole poem generated one word - honesty. You could clearly understand that there was this sense of truth in every word written. In my mind, an image of a ...
Jul 26, 2013 -
Re: Lost
For a newbie (like me), I think it is good. Just the rhyming took its toll in the whole poem. I would suggest that perhaps you could give the poem ...
Jul 26, 2013 -
Re: Bleeding Seconds
The poem is so strong. :) It created such image of celestial bodies in my mind - very deep thoughts, indeed! I also like how the essence of two unlike ...
Jul 26, 2013 -
Re: I Once Believed
Just great! :) It was poetry indeed! :) It created a stratospheric image in my mind. :)
Jul 25, 2013
