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Celjiii

  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Blank Page

    This poem is beautiful. I would've not thought about how "writing" would have a connection with "love". Truly, the opening was fantastic! It was a process of how writers begin ...

    Aug 3, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Vowing After Death

    Very nice poem about love. It surely gave me a sweet impression of how love feels. Indeed, it was clearly a "love-truth" in words. "The heart is one’s home Even ...

    Aug 3, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: I Tried

    The whole poem generated one word - honesty. You could clearly understand that there was this sense of truth in every word written. In my mind, an image of a ...

    Jul 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Lost

    For a newbie (like me), I think it is good. Just the rhyming took its toll in the whole poem. I would suggest that perhaps you could give the poem ...

    Jul 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Bleeding Seconds

    The poem is so strong. :) It created such image of celestial bodies in my mind - very deep thoughts, indeed! I also like how the essence of two unlike ...

    Jul 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Once Believed

    Just great! :) It was poetry indeed! :) It created a stratospheric image in my mind. :)

    Jul 25, 2013


Oh, Brightlord Tumul! How unexpected it is to see you standing there! I didn't mean to insult your stupidity. Really, it's quite spectacular and worthy of much praise.
— Wit (The Way of Kings by Brandon Sanderson)