CelerityFire21

Oh yeah. The you was a typo:) no worries

So this is where yours went. I like it.

I've been getting a lot of reviews saying it sounded weird at the end, but I think that i've got something to help that. And i'd be happy to look ...

I actually really like this edit. thank you so much for reviewing, this is my first poem, so it means a lot:)

Thank you so much for reviewing this poem! It's my first published poem on YWS, so it means a lot to me that you thought it was good:). And I ...

Thank you so much for telling me that the info part felt forced. I really appreciate it, because I had no clue:). And of course I will keep you in ...