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Yeah, I'm not the most structured writer... You are completely correct in your opinion, and I thank you for your criticism. I take every person at their word. I actually ...

I appreciate your amazing description and praise of my meager work. I do admit that the way I organize my work can be a little choppy... But thank you for ...

This is purely wonderful use of a simplistic but meaningful approach. I love the emphasis at the end of each stanza. " Please don't fall away My dearest, Please don't ...

The raw emotion you show is amazing with such simplistic verse. The meaning of the self love that is passed between parent to child is so perfectly put.