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Re: "I'm starving."
This piece speaks amazing truth. The imagery from just one line can conjure up so much. The only thing I thought just didn't really fit: "They have a mommy who ...
Nov 16, 2013 -
Re: REM DEPRIVED: Blue Petals
I must say, the apparent apocalypse is an interesting scenario. The way in which you describe the setting of the valley gives a great picture for the mind when reading. ...
Apr 4, 2013 -
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I believe that your use of the worms may speak to me specifically in a different way than you may have anticipated it coming across... The use of the "worms" ...
Feb 19, 2013 -
Re: Photographs of the Old House: Perfect Wedding
To be somewhat harsh, you really did not describe very much of anything. And it really didn't seem to be as much tension as you probably were trying to convey. ...
Nov 5, 2012 -
Re: Crime Scene Investigation
I cannot begin to say how magnificent your imagery and description were. The way you relate one thing to another just blows it out of the water. You have created ...
Nov 5, 2012 -
Re: Zombie Love
I'm sorry, but based on your title I was expecting something a little different than what it actually turned out to be. Having said that, in my opinion, since I ...
Nov 5, 2012 -
Re: Fear's name?
The personalization of fear itself is a concept that we all try to work through. But I feel like the questions leave more to be desired, it's not a bad ...
Nov 5, 2012
