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Re: Love born from fire
Hey there Mystique. CatherinKanya here to review your work. The poem was a beautiful piece and i simply loved it. It was a very imaginative one too. But i do ...
Jan 20, 2014 -
Re: Love is only a feeling.
Hey there GreenTulip. I thought the poem was lovely. I really love the way you described love. ' Love is an emotion, that zooms from your heart. Love is an ...
Jan 20, 2014 -
Re: Chris's Life
I really liked the short story. It was a humorous piece indeed. But i do think you could have described your characters better. Like for example, Bethany. I have no ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: The City of Stone
It was quite a simple story, and i liked it. It sure is mysterious and brings out questions like AEChronicle said-why is he running? But i think you could have ...
Jan 19, 2014