Catalyst

Oh, geez, don't feel bad! I procrastinate with the best of em' That article was super helpful, and I absolutely get what you mean about transitions and third-persons; its something ...

Thanks so much for the review! (Everyone has a bone to pick with that bandage line, I should really slap myself for messing up there) Anyway, glad you enjoyed it, ...

Thanks so much for the review, its really appreciated! I'll watch out for similar grammatical issues in the future, and I'm really glad you're enjoying it. This is where the ...

Hey there, thank-you very much for the review, it was super helpful! I'll watch out for those issues, especially those concerning fragments. I admit the peeling of the bandage was ...

Hey. thanks for the review, it was really helpful! I'll be returning the favour a little later tonight as I'm slightly busy. Just a couple things to clear up-- I ...

Thanks for the review! Let's just say those wounds exist because a fireball got acquainted with Nira's side! I'm glad you enjoyed it, regardless of not totally understanding it!

Thank-you so much for the review! I'll watch out in future for the repetition at the beginning of sentences. I'm afraid there'll probably be a sizeable delay between this chapter ...

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Hey, Catalyst here for a review! Alright, so this was quite a nice introductory piece, I love a lot of the description, and I'm getting a great sense of character. ...

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it, I'll be sure to comb over the next Chapter for similar errors. Overall, thanks for the help, and have a nice ...

Thanks for the review Just right off the bat, this is Fantasy, not historical fiction. Izalea ain't a place. Or the very least there isn't an Izalean mountain range crawling ...

Thanks for the review! I'll definitely note em-dashes, its not something I'm very familiar with. In the line "Few towns could be more unforgiving than the wilds of Izalea." I ...

Thanks for the review! I've noticed most people point out my structure tending not to be all that engaging, so it's something I'm working on.

Thanks for the review, I found it really helpful! I agree that it's a little slow-paced, I usually feel that first Chapters are for setting up a good background for ...

Thanks for the review, it was a lot of help. Yes, I am treating this as a draft, honestly.

No problem! If you have a few minutes to spare, I'd really appreciate it if you checked out my latest Chapter- The Endless Tapestry Part 1.