Catalyn

Thanks!

Right? Even productive stuff is distracting! Like that chapter I still need to read for Human Geo... oh well, that's what tomorrows are for.

I live in Texas, so hurricanes are a common thing, but I think this one was just a strong storm. I do write mainly in free verse because I can't ...

It's ok! I'm a mess on weekends too!

Right? My family just got into Downton Abbey and that's all I've watched for like 2 months. And I still have Olympic figure skating recorded...

I just updated the poem. I've gone back and done away with some capital letters and pluralized palm trees. Thanks for the feedback!

Thanks for the feedback, I have a bad habit of starting sentences with prepositions so thanks!

It is based on a true story, and thank you!

It's all good! I'm horrible about consistently writing and it would be quite hypocritical of me to judge you for being still rather on top of it.

Keep up the good work! It's nice to hear that my reviews are meaningful to someone! It's probably a good thing you don't have much experience with funerals, but it ...

Also, let me know when your next chapter come out!

I realize I left out the grey/reality areas, but this poem is about looking at something idealistically and the opposite of dangerous. I have a tendency to do this and ...

Yes! That's it! Thank you so much for all your help!

Perhaps:Why is lightning explained/by it's deadly power/Not it's beauty when/it dances in the sky?

Did you just happen to know the flowers, is that an interest, or did you look it up just to make the poem more interesting? Because that's pretty cool either ...