CastlesInTheSky

Hey there, SilverSunlight! Sarah here. XD Right, first things first. I liked this poem. It was simplistic, but that shows us that things don't always have to be intricately written ...

Hey there, writewatiwant. I'm Sarah and I'm your reviewer for today. My main concern with this poem is, though it has a good concept and ideas, you need to use ...

Hey there! I'm not going to do an indepth critique, as this all looks very polished. My main issue with this piece is: You're doing a lot of telling and ...

Hey there, Kirsten! Just thought I'd give you one of my advice critiques, as I'm bored and need to get up my reviewing count. One of your greatest strengths in ...

Hey there, kissthewitch! This is quite polished, and obviously edited, so I can focus on the storyline, a refreshing break from bad grammar and misspellings. The only technical thing I ...

Hey there, Icefire! I'm not going to do an indepth review as the awesome Squall has gone over all the points and I don't want to repeat everything he said. ...

*Drumroll* ... It's Sarah! XD Sorry if I sound harsh, as usual. You know me, nitpicking to death. The swift smell of Forget-Me-Not flowers rose my senses in a pleasant ...

Hey there, Niteowl! I liked this. The last verse was poignant yet ironic. My favourite, possibly: Quote: The second maiden watched, her own heart now filled with bitter loneliness, and ...

Hey there, order! I'm Sarah and I'm going to be your reviewer for today. I'm not going to do a review as I'll probably just repeat everything Jig's said, which ...

Hey there, Church! I'm Sarah and I'm your reviewer for today. I'm not going to do you an indepth review, as the amazing Jig has covered all the points, and ...

Here as requested, kissthewitch! Quote : Interesting dilemma: love and words, or love for words, as fancy dictates such. Both being beautiful as soaring birds, who love flying, I dare ...

Hey there, miya! I'm Sarah and I'm your friendly neighbourhood reviewer for today. I have to admit that what drew me in to the story was the French title. I ...

Hey there, Cooper! I'm Sarah and I'm your reviewer for today. I see you've already got your two reviews, making this post legal (:wink:), so I won't have to go ...

Hey there, Merry! ^_^ I do apologise for getting to this so late. I liked this. The writing style was crisp and to the point, and the plot was refreshing. ...

Here as requested. :D There was scratching, biting hitting, kicking and ripping. You need to insert a comma after 'biting' . Furthermore, this is a badly constructed sentence. You've basically ...