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Re: A Romantic Revenge -A perfect life and a perfect love
Hey LP here! I would just like to say this is a very interesting concept! I would however like to point out that your grammar mistakes do kind of wreak ...
Aug 23, 2023 -
Re: The Lookers
Hey LP here! I really love this short story of yours! The language and the way you use metaphors really intrigued me. How I interpreted this piece is how people ...
Aug 23, 2023 -
Re: I Never Asked You to Come
Hey LP here! I really loved this poem. The constant flow and the way you articulate your words. The message behind is is powerful. I interpreted it as someone coming ...
Aug 23, 2023 -
Re: camping (part 2)
Helloooooo momo! LP here for another review, I went back and read your first poem about camping and wow has it changed! I like the format the poem is in, ...
Sep 8, 2020 -
Re: Lost File//#0001
Ok ok ok hold up my mind is blown! Oh forgot to say Hey its LP! I really like this concept of yours for this. One critic is the change ...
Apr 27, 2020 -
Re: Black Box
Hey its LP! First off wow this hit hard but in a great way! The reader wants to know what happened and how it'll end just from reading the beginning! ...
Apr 25, 2020 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 19.2
I havent read the first chapter but wow this was good! Everything flowed nicely only a few Grammar issue. Such as in paragraph 2 instead of faster it should say ...
Jan 20, 2020