Cassandra

I liked it, and agree that it has a song-like quality. Still not so fond of the double "dance"s, but I LOVED the imagery. Nice work.

I liked this a lot. Imagery=excellent, and you captured the moment perfectly. Nice work.

Sounds interesting...I'll have to check this out.

Wow...now I feel like a heartless black hole for not crying... But I did love the book. A lot. And the second and third books in the trilogy, of course. ...

I thought it was pretty funny and cute, definitely not dark. I liked the little parallels you made, like him cutting his knee and her painting here nails blood red. ...

I thought Of Mice and Men was really good-we had to read it this year in school. It was sad, though, too. :( I haven't read any of his other ...

I can't seem to come up with some constructive criticism for the beginning and end, but the middle I loved. Overall, nice job. :thumb:

It's nice and short, and the meaning is clear and easy to grasp. Nice job! :thumb:

I really like the image this conjures, all the shimmering ballrooms and masks. I love the edited version. Great job! :)

You paint a beautiful picture in this poem and the imagery is great. I can completely picture this scene. Great job! :thumb:

I see my life in raindrops; tiny water-bubbled memories, as they fall. I liked the whole thing, but I liked that imagery above especially. Nice job. :thumb: