Cassandra

And...James wasn't a seeker. He was a chaser. The movies just messed it up. But I'm probably the only Harry Potter freak on here that will notice it, so it's ...

I dunno. The whole "I caught you" thing just seemed kind of sudden for some reason...? I'm not really sure. Maybe if you said something when Eleanor first started to ...

What is Lolita about, very generally speaking? ^ Aye, I'd like to know, too. It's obviously very good if everyone likes it so much but...what's the story about?

^ Yeah, the characters bothered me too somtimes, backgroundbob. And the ending...I kinda wish it was the sister they had killed off. She, in my opinion, deserved to die. She ...

Ah, well, better to have tons of imagination and ideas than to be a grammar dictionary with no creativity. ;)

Maybe I'm just dim, but I didn't get it either. Care to elaborate? ;)

Huh. Didn't see the date that you posted this. Just saw that it had new replies and assumed it was new. Eh. The grammar crusade was fun, though. XD

Usually when someone posts a piece in the lit forums they're looking for someone to read and critique their work. Maybe next time you should post a note along with ...

Alrighty, I've got a critique coming here, slowly but surely. It's taking me a couple of days because this is so long, but it's coming. :D

Well, it was supposed to be another (rival) gang that killed him. The previous night, when Angel and his gang were tagging the graffiti wall, one of them crossed out ...

Fixed the typo.... Thanks for taking the time to read! :D

All righty. I took the suggestions you made, antigone, and fixed some stuff. Thanks you both so much for the feedback! The anonymity of being in a gang clashing with ...

Loved the imagery! No word was useless: every word propeled the poem forward. Great job! :D

It's hard for me to tell at the moment about Brenna's powers, I guess because you haven't gotten into it that much. Honestly, I'm not liking it that much right ...

I always love your poetry. It's so beautiful. And the imagery in this is fantastic...the pictures your words painted=beautiful. Great job. :D