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Thank you very much for your response. I will repost within 24 hours and hope you like it. :)

This poem is very well put and you are pretty good!

Hey! I'm young and kind of new at this whole writing thing. I have writing competitions at my school like twice a year and try to get better. I was ...

That is very good. I just think you don't need to add the part about the lemonade.

I think it is very nice. I'm more of a descriptive person myself but love your work. P.S The sweatpants thing might be a bit much

I think it is very nice. I'm more of a descriptive person myself but love your work. P.S The sweatpants thing might be a bit much