CarsonTheArson

Heyo Beanbird! Oh look at that, seems like you get to be my first review in like, what, over a year? Congratulations! ANYWAY This is pretty neat. I liked this ...

I quite enjoy this story :) I love the story and all the different characters. Aww, poor Valdor... I felt so bad for him while reading this. XD I kinda ...

Greetings! Here I am to say things about this lovely piece :3 First off, I like this a lot. Sebessia is an interesting character (LOVE her name by the way), ...

Hello there! Cay here to review! First off, some favorites lines before we begin: "Worms of sweat slithered down his face as he sprinted through the dark." XD That is ...

Per your request, here I am to review! :) First off, I love this. There is so much mystery to it and I want to read more! There weren't a ...

I love this poem! :D And the ending made me bust out laughing! I think you did pretty well on this. You kept to the rhyme scheme really well, and ...

This was quite an interesting piece, but I feel like you could have done more with it. It was funny though, when you mentioned the dragons flying by I had ...

First off, this is quite interesting, and I kinda like it. :) It's strangeness makes it that much more intriguing. I love how you described what was going on and ...

Hey Neverland! This is pretty cool :) I love how, even though it is short, this has a big impact. And the way it is set up, the phrases scattered ...

This seems like an interesting story. I like it so far, but there are things you can improve on. First off, there are some grammatical errors, but those are easy ...

Hiya! Secret Santa here! :3 Wow, I think this is quite a powerful poem. You bring to light a hard situation that some kids have to go through without a ...

Loved it! I was pulled in from the beginning, wondering what the "Insycrion" and the "Occasius" were. I would have liked to see a little more detail about those, however. ...

Loved it! I haven't read the original story, so I don't know how your story differs from it, but I think this is a great fairy tale. I like the ...

Well you have an interesting idea going on here. A strange man living in this old street who demands food if you want to go through and this girl who ...

I liked this a lot. I think you did well with creating suspense, making me wonder who Khalid wants dead and why. Also, when Mikel says, "Do you think he ...