CarolineNaveen

Wow, thank you so much! Really appreciate it, it's still a work in progress...there are so many things that could be done to make it better. If you have any ...

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Thanks, and I appreciate the review. I've started passing it out at our state theatre and they became very interested, so I'm now working with a published playwright to transition ...

That would be ablsolutely amazing if you could help me punctuate this, I keep getting that review from a lot of people! Also, these reviews were a few months ago ...

Yes you're totally right! It is my very first draft and I haven't really had a chance to go over it yet. I'll defiantly work on all the things you ...

Wow this was short compared to what you gave me a review for...I'll do my best to give you the best review that I can. I might consider revising the ...

Thanks so much for your input I really appreciate it. I went through and updated the draft using your suggestions and will continue to revise it.