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Re: The Tree In Our Garden
Hi EvaR14! Here for a quick review. :) I loved the symbolism of this short story. Right away I knew that the tree symbolized something important: youth, lost time, and ...
May 23, 2021 -
Re: The Chronicles of Carina: Legend of the Nanawars
Hi, Yoshi! Here for a review for this masterpiece! First of all: wow, I am amazed by the depths of this story and lore. It seems like with every passing ...
Apr 17, 2021 -
Re: Bottled Euphoria
Hello! I thought I'd leave you a quick review for Review Day. :) I like the concept of this - a "bottle of happiness" or "bottle of euphoria" is illegally ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: 15 Minute Writer's Prompt
Hello! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review for Review Day. First of all, you are an excellent writer, especially if you wrote this in only 15 minutes. ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: What Lies Beneath
Hi Blue!
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 11.1
yes this is from 2018 so I'll leave a quick review lol I feel like this chapter is a tipping point for plot. The reader finally understands James Tiberius and ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 9.2
HELLO YES I went back a few chapters >_> mostly because it's Review Day and there was a little teeny bit of critique I didn't say in my comment, and ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 17.1
Oh boy, Shady. I don't have to read the other chapters to fully understand what happened here. It's simple, really. I'll break it down for you, just so you understand ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 2.1
HEWWO SOUNDIE!! This is so ooooooold and I feel sad that I didn't get too far when reviewing this for LMS (TWO YEARS AGO LOL...smh), so HERE I AM!! This ...
Nov 2, 2020 -
Re: sinking.
Hey Shades! Abstract poetry like this is more of my style and I approve. 8) First of all, hearts to you.
Oct 6, 2020 -
Re: stars of cheese that fall like snowflakes
Hey, whatcha! Me? Reviewing poetry?! Crazy, but stranger things have happened in 2020. :P This piece caught my eye, and I had a hankering for abstract poetry, so I thought ...
Oct 6, 2020 -
Re: informational dissonance within an entertainment phenomenon
Wassup my dude! Here to give you some ~epic~ poetry advice, because I'm definitely an expert in political haikus. So first, the title. Not only is the title a poem ...
Oct 1, 2020 -
Re: Seeing Jack
Hey Elinor! ;) soo uhh you posted this work on the month and year I joined YWS, and your account is over ten years old, so thank you for giving ...
Sep 3, 2020 -
Re: An Essay on the Boy Scouts of America
Heyyo manila folder
Sep 2, 2020 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 1.2
ASKJDFHLKSJDFH SORRY I TOOK SO LONG 4GIVE ME ASDKFLJLS can first just say aHHHHHHHH WESTERN FEELS YOU ARE DOING SUCH A GREAT JOB AT SETTING THIS UP AND I LOVE ...
Jul 10, 2018