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  • Other » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: The Tree In Our Garden

    Hi EvaR14! Here for a quick review. :) I loved the symbolism of this short story. Right away I knew that the tree symbolized something important: youth, lost time, and ...

    May 23, 2021

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Humor
    Re: The Chronicles of Carina: Legend of the Nanawars

    Hi, Yoshi! Here for a review for this masterpiece! First of all: wow, I am amazed by the depths of this story and lore. It seems like with every passing ...

    Apr 16, 2021

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Re: Bottled Euphoria

    Hello! I thought I'd leave you a quick review for Review Day. :) I like the concept of this - a "bottle of happiness" or "bottle of euphoria" is illegally ...

    Jan 31, 2021

  • Short Story » Technology, Science Fiction
    Re: 15 Minute Writer's Prompt

    Hello! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review for Review Day. First of all, you are an excellent writer, especially if you wrote this in only 15 minutes. ...

    Jan 31, 2021

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: What Lies Beneath

    Hi Blue!

    Jan 31, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Lost Dragon 11.1

    yes this is from 2018 so I'll leave a quick review lol I feel like this chapter is a tipping point for plot. The reader finally understands James Tiberius and ...

    Jan 30, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Lost Dragon 9.2

    HELLO YES I went back a few chapters >_> mostly because it's Review Day and there was a little teeny bit of critique I didn't say in my comment, and ...

    Jan 30, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 17.1

    Oh boy, Shady. I don't have to read the other chapters to fully understand what happened here. It's simple, really. I'll break it down for you, just so you understand ...

    Jan 30, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: The Lost Dragon 2.1

    HEWWO SOUNDIE!! This is so ooooooold and I feel sad that I didn't get too far when reviewing this for LMS (TWO YEARS AGO LOL...smh), so HERE I AM!! This ...

    Nov 2, 2020

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: sinking.

    Hey Shades! Abstract poetry like this is more of my style and I approve. 8) First of all, hearts to you.

    Oct 6, 2020

  • Poetry » Spiritual, General
    Re: stars of cheese that fall like snowflakes

    Hey, whatcha! Me? Reviewing poetry?! Crazy, but stranger things have happened in 2020. :P This piece caught my eye, and I had a hankering for abstract poetry, so I thought ...

    Oct 6, 2020


  • Wassup my dude! Here to give you some ~epic~ poetry advice, because I'm definitely an expert in political haikus. So first, the title. Not only is the title a poem ...

    Sep 30, 2020

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: Seeing Jack

    Hey Elinor! ;) soo uhh you posted this work on the month and year I joined YWS, and your account is over ten years old, so thank you for giving ...

    Sep 2, 2020

  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Review
    Re: An Essay on the Boy Scouts of America

    Heyyo manila folder

    Sep 1, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Lost Dragon 1.2

    ASKJDFHLKSJDFH SORRY I TOOK SO LONG 4GIVE ME ASDKFLJLS can first just say aHHHHHHHH WESTERN FEELS YOU ARE DOING SUCH A GREAT JOB AT SETTING THIS UP AND I LOVE ...

    Jul 9, 2018


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