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Hi EvaR14! Here for a quick review. :) I loved the symbolism of this short story. Right away I knew that the tree symbolized something important: youth, lost time, and ...

Hi, Yoshi! Here for a review for this masterpiece! First of all: wow, I am amazed by the depths of this story and lore. It seems like with every passing ...

Hello! I thought I'd leave you a quick review for Review Day. :) I like the concept of this - a "bottle of happiness" or "bottle of euphoria" is illegally ...

Hello! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review for Review Day. First of all, you are an excellent writer, especially if you wrote this in only 15 minutes. ...

Hi Blue!

yes this is from 2018 so I'll leave a quick review lol I feel like this chapter is a tipping point for plot. The reader finally understands James Tiberius and ...

HELLO YES I went back a few chapters >_> mostly because it's Review Day and there was a little teeny bit of critique I didn't say in my comment, and ...

Oh boy, Shady. I don't have to read the other chapters to fully understand what happened here. It's simple, really. I'll break it down for you, just so you understand ...

HEWWO SOUNDIE!! This is so ooooooold and I feel sad that I didn't get too far when reviewing this for LMS (TWO YEARS AGO LOL...smh), so HERE I AM!! This ...

Hey Shades! Abstract poetry like this is more of my style and I approve. 8) First of all, hearts to you.

Hey, whatcha! Me? Reviewing poetry?! Crazy, but stranger things have happened in 2020. :P This piece caught my eye, and I had a hankering for abstract poetry, so I thought ...

Wassup my dude! Here to give you some ~epic~ poetry advice, because I'm definitely an expert in political haikus. So first, the title. Not only is the title a poem ...

Hey Elinor! ;) soo uhh you posted this work on the month and year I joined YWS, and your account is over ten years old, so thank you for giving ...

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