CaptianRandom

Hey Ilovebubbles123 Thank you so much for being the first to read this story, i really wanted to know how i went writing this first chapter, and i hope to ...

NO d@ydre@mer27 thank you, this is my first love short story, i need all the help to improve i can get, THANKS

Hi R.O.C i am very sorry if i almost copied your title i did not realise until i reviewed your poem, i really did not, if it makes you happy ...

For all those left confused after reading the last line, I am sorry but I couldn't think of anything else. Please submit any suggestions.

Hey ROC, i like this poem, but i feel it didn't go anywhere. i liked the length and the spacing within words. All Together i don't know what to think ...

Hey RepublicOfCoter i loved this poem, very descriptive, good length for a poem like this, nicely spaced, and i loved how you described the stars and the moon, if they ...

loved it, it made me feel happy LOL

Hi anti-pop i am CaptianRandom I loved this, it made me feel happy, it was good length and space between paragraphs, i love this poem and i hope to read ...

i loved this, i don't really know how to describe this, keep up the good work.

thanks i need to improve on my grammar i should re read my work :)

RepublicOfCoter, thanks for your support, your really helpful (sarcasm) kingolions, thanks for your support (not sarcasm)

Yes you were hard on me, this was my first upload, and i am not very good on grammar.

ideas are all around us. :) that is so right

In the debts of darkness, one must find light in order to find ones true self. You can’t always get what you want but you must always get a little. ...

Welcome to YWS Captain Random! The poem has turned into a blob of text, that makes it difficult to read and even harder to critique. Most critiques involve looking at ...