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Re: I find love in front of a bakery shop.
I enjoyed the theme of this poem. It has very nice rhythm and emotion. It is quite different in terms of subject matter but handled very nicely. Some of your ...
Apr 30, 2016 -
Re: A Pocket Full of Posies (8)
I absolutely love your writing style. I enjoy the conversational manner in which you lead the story as well as the distinct personalities of each character. I am very interested ...
Apr 30, 2016 -
Re: Slowly Dying
I really like this. I enjoy how subtly you introduce the drug use. The repetition of: "I guess I'm dying, And if I'm not, I'm surely trying..." Is very effective. ...
Apr 30, 2016 -
Re: Brainwashed | Introduction
Hi there:) This is a very gripping piece and I like the idea that we have to figure out the character's past with her. The main crit I have is ...
Apr 30, 2016
