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CaptainJade

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Daisy hears strange noises

    It all feels really vivid and immersive, and the comfort and fear combination is done so well. You’re drawn into the scene, and the inclusion of Salem is nice and ...

    Mar 26
  • Other » Dramatic, General Re: a collection of something and someone

    It’s very intense and chaotic in a very powerful way. It really immerses you in the repetition and emotion. The concept of “378” is very memorable, and the whole thing ...

    Mar 26
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Last Spell 46.2

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    The raw emotion that has been captured on this scene is incredible. Cyrin's vulnerability is established in terms of his discussions regarding his sister, Allison, and choices he made in ...

    Apr 25, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin Prologue

    Woah, this was awesome! The atmosphere weighed down so much in its immersion; I could feel the tension mounting with each paragraph. Borus is pretty much a menacing villain, and ...

    Apr 25, 2025
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Haunting of Gati's Estate

    ohh thanks for the idea!!

    Mar 6, 2025
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Haunting of Gati's Estate

    thanks!!

    Mar 6, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Satire Re: Work

    real

    Mar 6, 2025
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Haunting of Gati's Estate

    CHAT! i hope yall like the story its my first time writing ^^

    Nov 11, 2024


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