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Well well Lulu. After having read this, I find myself genuinely worried. Could you please enlighten me, as to how am I supposed to raise my writing to your level? ...

Lucrezia! I am finally here! So incredibly sorry for taking so long. I'm afraid I will only review this for today, I need to hit the haystack and recharge :) ...

Hi there, let me properly introduce myself: I am Calvinn, here to review for you during the World Cup! :) So, nitpicks! Here we go - I can already see ...

Hi there! Calvinn to review for you on Review World Cup :D First off, let's start with some nitpicks - "That is the question we explored today through various means." ...

Normally, I'd introduce myself, write something friendly or cheerful, but I don't have the heart. I would like to focus on two things - your story from an objective point ...

Hi there! Calvinn to review for you on World Cup day :) First off, here are a few nitpicks which caught my eye - "I stepped off the bedroom, he ...

"Four days after Reean's punishment the A Team that had been sent to the mission in Raef returned." - comma before A team "were still shaken from events there" - ...

"He’d be at the end" - He'd sit at the end has a nicer tone to it :) I think you need to add a little more plausibility here. Sirena ...

"my last bloodline" - either "we are the last of our bloodline" or maybe, "when, and if, I'm gone, you'll be the last of our bloodline" (you know being vampiric ...

So, Lucrezia, I saved my reviews for review day ;) That has been my evil plan all along (muhahaha). So as usual, your work never lets me down. You've got ...

Hi BloodInk, Calvinn to review for you :) You managed to portray a very destructive tragedy i.e. loneliness. I know that it is very possible you wrote this poem with ...

Hi Niraco! Calvinn to review for you :) At the moment, I am too tired to do this properly, so apologies, but no nitpicks! But thank God for something refreshing ...

Hey Lucrezia, Calvinn here to review! I must confess, I have not read the previous chapters but it did not seem to matter! Wow! You really blew me away with ...

Hi Rosan, Calvinn to review for you! I'll start right away, and leave the comments for later. 'couch windows' - I think you mean 'coach' 'Axel got his belongings' - ...

Hi megsug! Calvinn to give you your first review? I cannot understand why this is still in the Green Room. It makes for a very, very good read. Don't be ...