Calligraphy

As you are getting back into writing regularly I am getting back into reviewing poetry. So please bear with me and my short unworthy review. Anyhow honestly the first stanza ...

Hi 32. Alright so this is a pretty short piece of prose so this review may not be too long. Also, though it is under romance, it isn't the typical ...

Hi Sparks! This was really good. I am afraid I won't be able to help you much because I mostly have praise. : ) Good things: 1. Your characters were ...

Hi Paws. This piece is very short so I don't have a ton to say about it. But I will get right to the review. The first thing I want ...

Hi amiemalamie. I found this prologue by looking in Novels & Novellas. So before I start my review I would like to say that I love your novel name: Sugar ...

Hi AJ, I'm here to review this, though, because I don't read this type of stuff very much, I doubt I will be able to help you a lot. If ...

Hi Cio, do you like the site so far? I hope you do! Alright, so, this first chapter, but like all pieces of writing it can be improved! I only ...

Hi ilovetowrite! I'm glad to see you have posted! I liked this, but like all writing it can be improved! : ) O.K. so, I think the biggest problem with ...

Hi emmy. First I would like to say that you should probably split this into two parts. It is very large and people have busy lives. The sheer amount of ...

Hi again Shorty! Like Halogirl said you shouldn't give your description in big clumps like that. Giving info dumps is just annoying and confusing to the reader. We won't be ...

Hi Shorty! First I would like to say that your avvie is awesome. We seem to have the same taste in music. XD The second thing I noticed was that ...

Hi 23! So, I see that you are new to the site. How do you like it so far? At first YWS can be a bit big and complicated, but ...

Hi DakotaK! I haven't read the previous chapters of this so if I I'm not right about something just ignore me! One thing that would have been nice though if ...

Hi Leroy. This is a very good piece, but because you decided not to continue I wouldn't really call it a short story; it is more of a flash fiction ...

Hi Carlito. I haven't read the first chapter of this so I'm apologizing if I get anything wrong. I thought this pretty good. I don't usually read romance so that ...