Calligraphy

Well I really like the idea behind this, but it isn't in poetry format. O.K. if there is this new age idea that a poem should be whatever way it ...

This exactly what school does to me. School is supposed to be where you learn things, but also where you be creative. Or so they say. But school tries to ...

I like the repetition. You certainly have your style down. But the lines, don't seem to connect. That is the only problem. I don't have any idea what the poem ...

Can the ocean ever deny the waves? Or the heavens all the other times you say 'ever' here deny the soul they save? You have an unneeded space I will ...

To join the circus, To uneeded walk the tightrope And ride on Dumbo as he flies. I call for her and plead for? her now, Oh, why won't she come? ...

It’s fun to be at the YWS I think this line should be: It's fun to have some YWS. Because you can't be at YWS... That is only one of ...

But , now I've no hair left for cutting, And even less heart left to break. I would take this word out for rhythm. I really like this poem short ...

I am really not sure how to review this. Because it involves things I really can't relate to, but I will try. Also, the lines are long and feel like ...

First of all I want to say I love this poem. The beginning completely drew me in, but it seemed to dwindle off at the end. I thought there was ...

The first thing I want to say is, I really love this poem. It has a wonderful idea and story. It also needs a lot of revision and editing. This ...

Home The sound of a key in a rusty lock Bright clothes strewn cheerfully over the floor Lying on your bed, a lonely sock The feel of bathroom tiles on ...

Words I think you should add are in blue. The bus ride with you To me , felt like years We saw half the country With no cares or fears ...

words I would take out Bubbling, bubbling, A white sea of foam. Happily, happily, through it my child roams. This line made me think of a beach not a bath ...

Long Fuzzy Socks I would take this out. This is such a cute poem I loved it. I can just picture it being in a kid's book :) Keep writing. ...

Well, this is short so there isn't much to review. The rhyming and rhythm is good as far as I can tell. There are no grammar errors or anything. The ...