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Re: Love and Death
Hey, it's Calla I love the metaphores, and the way your wrote it. It's a really clever idea, and it shows that the notice the world, which is awesome. "Take ...
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: 'Falling For You' - Prologue
Hey, it's Calla! This is freakign awesome! I can't wait to read more and to find out what happens! The only thing that I could find was "he looked away ...
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: Dresses and Politics Part 3: Chapter 1
Hey, It's Calla! This is awesome! You're a really good writer. If you've set two other series/stories in this world, then you'll know it really well, which I like to ...
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: Search For Peace Book 1 ~ The Great Separation Chapter 1
Hi there! its calla! Firstly: Where can I read more! It seems like a really interesting piece, in a pretty awesome fatasy world, where the author knows their characters. I ...
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: Northeast: Chapter 1 [Second Draft]
This is really cool! The way you gave us the information that we'd need to know later on is awesome, and your descriptions of the characters are really really good. ...
Jul 18, 2016 -
Re: The Violet Wars (Teaser Chapter 1)
Oh my God!!! This is amazing! Like, it's so awesome, I could read this for hours and hours! I like the way it begins with a flashback, and then jump ...
Jul 18, 2016 -
Re: The Enchanted- Prologue
Ok, so this is amazing! I could sit and read this for hours! Your characters are amazing, and I get the feeling that you really know the world you're creating, ...
Jul 18, 2016
