CaitlinGrant

I definitely liked it, and it totally captivated me. You have a great hook right from the beginning that makes people want to read more, and when you tell and ...

The description in this story is very good-- it's vivid and strong and I can imagine the scene unfolding in my mind's eye. The tension and suspense are good, just ...

Wow. Really. Just...wow. That was really beautiful, and very deep. I love the way you describe everything smoothly, and give the world around you a personailty. It really adds to ...

Hey! I like the way your story leaves us wondering what happened, and what is going to happen. you did a really good job with that. My suggestion would be ...

Hey! Let me start out by saying that I really like this story. It has an interesting beginning, and so far the plot seems interesting. When you write, try to ...