Cairo

The man in the poem is a very real person, and you just prompted an image of him in a dress into my mind. Thank you for that. Made me ...

Thank you for the review! I appreciate the positive feedback! It`s a bit of an ambiguous poem, best to draw your own conclusions haha. I may think about putting in ...

Thank you! I`m glad you liked it.

I agree that there should be a stanza break there. The narrator `looking back`was meant literally as opposed to the figurative way of `reminiscing`. I will however take a look ...

Thank you! I appreciate your feedback and I`m glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for all the reviews! I appreciate the feedback!

Thanks for the review! (Late thanks, oops)

Thanks for the review! :) I tend not to capitalize in my poetry but maybe one day I'll start haha.

Thanks for the review. I agree that "you and I" were used too much, I realized it about .002 seconds after posting this haha. I think I'm going to opt ...

Hey! Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'd love it if you could review and let me know what I could do to make it better. Thanks! ...

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Hey Lightsong. That's awesome that you read my other poems, I'm glad you decided to review this one! In my mind the dress itself was never very important but if ...

Hi Racket. Thanks for the review. Your feedback is quite comprehensive, which I appreciate. I was actually looking at the first stanza and I think you're right, it does need ...

The lack of capitalization was definitely intentional. I agree the formatting could use some work. Thanks for the feedback! -Cairo

I agree that the formatting could definitely use some work. I'll definitely take a look at lines 2 & 3/4 & 5 and see how I could alter them. Thanks ...