Cailey

Oh, those hyphens are my downfall. I tend to get so carried away with punctuation and add way too much. And then when I try to take them out my ...

Hey, thanks for reviewing even without being a poetry person! I appreciate it. :) And I am thinking that maybe I'll work on this more (something I don't usually do ...

Yeah, that could be part of the meaning. But even more than that I was trying to show that sometimes there's nothing you can do to lose. Like sometimes even ...

Yeah, that could be part of the meaning. But even more than that I was trying to show that sometimes there's nothing you can do to lose. Like sometimes even ...

Thanks. I meant to have always on a line of its own, kind of emphasizing it. But win does look weird on a line by itself.

Thanks for the review!

Thank you for the review!

Thank you for the review!

Thanks. I know it's hard to review such a short poem, but it's for a contest and so I was trying to make it as short as I could and ...

I am guessing this is one of the many deleted works I have. :)

it is, it's really fun to experiment with, I think. :D

I guess it doesn't really matter, since I realized after reviewing that it does show the other parts on the side. But I know I posted a four section short ...

Yay! Thanks for answering all my questions. :) I think maybe it's just my writer's side, but I always want to know more than what I'm given. Curiosity winning out... ...

haja, yeah, the Amazon was definitely different than Lima. (We stopped in Lima for a few days on the way back.) I will see what I can do about that ...

Thank you for this review!! I'm glad you liked it!!