Cailey

Thanks! I might need some reminders to keep working on this- as it is not my main project at all, just something for fun to post on YWS. :D

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!!

Thank you!! :D

Thank you! Glad you liked it. :D

I like the edits! The stanza breaks really helped, too. :D

yeah, description's hard. And I always feel like I am adding in a ton of description, but then the people reading it don't agree. Haja! I guess I describe more ...

No worries. :) Thank you tons for the review!

Thank you! And don't we all have that wanting to write but can't?

I wish I could give you a review, but I'm too sleepy and I loved this. :)

Yeah, more about the eyes will follow in the next chapter. And I will try and get to more about where they are and what they're walking through. (To be ...

Thanks!!

Okay. Awesome! Thanks, and I will try and get more memorable descriptions.

"empty room as I sat on the one piece of furniture" "walls, the floor, the ceiling. Everything grey, everything cold, everything hard." "eyes, shifting back and forth and up and ...

Awesome! Thanks, and I will work on that.

Thanks! :D I will continue to keep you updated.