Cailey

Like it so much!! You are very talented. I don't have very much of a review, but I will try and say something helpful. :D And, since it is review ...

I actually really like this. :D It is very inpsirational. :D Ka! Ta! Na! Three syllables. Three breaths laced with Laced with adrenaline? I think you could find a better ...

I'm walking through these empty halls Are you at school? And if so, why is it empty? filled with memories of you okay, good start. surrounded by a silent darkness ...

First off, I found this confusing, and at the same time it was all put so bluntly. I think this would make a better story, where you could give more ...

Lovely. :) I am wondering why you have the whole poem in italics? It is a bit strange, I'd say. Not bad, or distracting, but I'm wondering why you decided ...

Very good poem, I liked it, and I liked the title. I realized as I read that I live in a dreamworld all the time. Seriously, I am hardly ever ...

As far as poetry, this was incredible. You had some beautiful descriptions and imagery and diction. I love every line you used, every word used to mention the moon. However, ...

I agree with SubjectBlue, I have no clue what this was about. It sounded nice and beautiful and smooth, but when I finished, I was just confused. Also, your rhyming ...

Love it, and I know the feeling very well. Blank pages are very taunting and annoying and frustrating. Sometimes I am tempted to scribble all over a page just so ...

Love it!! The ending brought it all together, made it so sweet and cute. I will now review. :) Light screams from your eyes, I would use another word in ...

If this is something you didn't spend time on, I can't imagine how your other poetry sounds. This was amazing. Whoever you wrote this for must feel so special and ...

Wow, this was amazing. You have so much talent! You had amazing imagery and details. Every line was good, each phrase painted pictures in my mind that were beautiful, and ...

I miss the days with no fears, Don't we all? :/ You did a great job at catching the reader's interest and making it personal right from the start. days ...

So, this was interesting, and short. I think overall you could have made it longer, added more detail, more imagery. Make the readers feel what you are feeling, see what ...

Well, I must say I disagree with the overall message of the poem. I believe true love does exist and is not a fail. However, especially in today's society there ...